100 WC Week#11

“Hurry! Quick!”

I snatch out my phone and dial 000 immediately. One minute we’re skating at the park, the next we’re looking after the gash on the side of Jacob’s head.

“You’ve called 000, what’s your emergency?”

“My friend has fallen off his skateboard and has a massive scab on his head,”

“Where are you?”

“Skate Park in Dendy Reserve, how fast can you get here?”

“Fast, don’t worry,”

When the connection broke I know that they’re on their way.

“Hang in there, Jacob,” my friend, Tyler repeats. “You’ll be okay,”

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One comment to 100 WC Week#11

  1. Perri says:

    Alexis, the way you used voice in this 100 word challenge is brilliant. When I was reading this I made the voices in my mind which made it very interesting. I cannot fault this as you have used the correct conventions. Maybe next time you could think about your word choice.

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